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lonely little girl

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So, sad and lonely girl,
So melancholy, so bittersweet
The key has reached its boiling point

She paints her tragedy
But she says not a word
And up there, in her alcove,
Her soul's a caged bird
Her heart is bound in chains
She clings to her past
Her canvas shows her shackles
All can plainly see it
But her

She sits and paints her pictures
Without a care in the world,
Or so it seems
She sits in the alcove,
Leaving her message upon the wall
She moves like clockwork,
This lonely little doll
She's just sitting pretty
But you see it in her eyes
She's a shadow of her former self

No medium in particular,
Just lost in thought as she creates,
Reminiscing over an old lost life
She's a princess, she's an imposter,
This sad and lonely girl
Her smile is painted on
A smile you see is hollow

She's everyone
She's a nobody
Her identity is lost
She sits there in her attic
Sits there collecting dust
All but forgotten

So, lonely little girl,
Who does she see in the mirror, now?
She leaves no reflection
Other than her emptiness

She sits and paints her pictures
Without a care in the world,
or so it seems
She sits in the alcove,
Leaving her message upon the wall
She moves like clockwork,
This lonely little doll
She's just sitting pretty
But you see it in her eyes
She's a shadow of her former self

This lonely little princess,
She tells me her story through her colors,
Her tragic, fleeting love,
She smiles, but it's empty
She's traveled around the world,
This lonely Delilah,
But who could help her now?
Who could help her now?
Sorry for the tease, folks.

This morning as I was waking up from a dream I was having, (in which I was peeling some wallpaper off a wall in my grandparent's house, unveiling this poem I had apparently written when I was six years old; I'd written and carved it on the wall, and there were accompanying Mirrormask-style illustrations and it was all cool, hence where "the key has reached its boiling point" came from. I know it makes no sense but shut up it's poetry. xD ANYWAY there was this girl sitting there and I think she was who this poem was about. She was wearing red, black, and gold Victorian-style clothing and she had very long, curly, ink-black hair and dark brown eyes. Pale skin, ruby-red lips. She was just so pretty and so sad looking.)

So anyway I was waking up and I'm like "I HAS TO WRITE POETRY NAO" and I spewed this thing out in less than 20 minutes. I'll probably improve it as I see fit; I think its ending is rather abrupt, but other than that I'm pleased with it.

Of course I should know better than to repeat other people's mistakes (see: Stephanie Meyer) and write literature based off stuff I dreamed (see: Twilight) but yeaaaahh I'm kind of being a massive hypocrite so I'll shut up about that.

I think the girl in question is a combination of some of my favorite female characters. She kind of reminds me of Xion and Namine from Kingdom Hearts (themes of "Nobody", then all the artwork) and Helena from MirrorMask (artwork on the wall). Yeah.

HAI I'M STILL MAKING STUFFFFF <33 ILU GUISE
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RoxiLore's avatar
LOL yah I ttly got the Namine vibe lol.

Very pretty and epic and NOTHING like Stephanie's nasty stuff.